Saturday, November 18, 2006

Editorial Blindness

By Keith Fisher

First let me apologize for the poor way this is written. Here at LDS Writers BLOGCk we have a group where we meet and review each other’s blog before we post it. I for one have benefited immensely from this relationship.

Normally I tend to capitalize things, and I repeat words to the point of distraction. I used to write "started" a lot. Now I use the word "that". I am so glad that Nichole has eyes to notice that. (You see I did it again.) Connie and Gaynell constantly ask me to explain my meanings, Cindy, (I mean Inky) should be an English teacher because she catches things that I should know better.

Darvell is an inspiration, Wendy helps me see things in a different way, Karen gives me ideas, and it’s a blessing for me to be associated with these people.

Now that you have read this far, have you spotted any errors yet? I couldn’t ask my friends to look this over because I have been in a crisis since last Thursday and didn’t get it written in time.

I don’t know what’s wrong with me, but I have editorial blindness. I can look at a whole page of manuscript and not see any mistakes. Then I have what I call a slap myself on the forehead moment, when I see colored marks from an editor. I fix the mistake and move on. I think those moments are getting fewer and farther between. (It’s a good thing. I was getting a headache.) I am getting better, but I don’t think I will ever outgrow an editor.

That’s the beauty of a writers group. At Authors Incognito, I have friends that can see what I missed. We’re tolerant of each other because we know how many mistakes we make ourselves. We all have editorial blindness to one degree or other. For those of you who don’t know, Authors Incognito is the writers group who sponsors this blog. You can join by attending a LDS StoryMakers writer’s conference.

Those of you who don’t live on the Wasatch Front may not have heard the commercial that says, "You have a friend in the diamond business". For those of you who are members of Authors Incognito I would say, "You have a friend in the writing business," Even the authors will help out.

This was going to be a piece about the approach of the Christmas season and the shameful way we commercialize it. Maybe I’ll save that for another time. Until then, feel free to comment and tell me how many errors I made. It will make my friends feel good to know they have been so helpful to me. Comment anyway, I love to see responses, it always makes my day.

6 comments:

Nichole Giles said...

Keith,
This time I'll say your blog is perfect! You have a strength for reading between the lines, and your words always have a special parable-type feeling. You are a teacher to us as well.

Thanks for your kind words.

Nichole

C. L. Beck said...

Keith,
I loved this. Your sense of humor and unique perspective always tickles me. Thanks for your kind thoughts about us, as well.

Stephanie Black said...

It amazes me what I can overlook in my writing. A fresh perspective from an outside reader is so wonderfully helpful!

Tristi Pinkston said...

You know what, your personality is shining through and that's overriding any mistakes that might be there. (See those two "that"s in there? :)

Heather B. Moore said...

I must have the disease too. It's hard for me to be an unbiased editor on my own work. I also use "started" and "began" a lot. In fact, today I was doing some editing and kept finding those words. Ack!

Heather B. Moore said...

Oh, and I'll be waiting to read your blog about the commercialism of Christmas. My husband and I feel the same way.